Script of the Week: A Monster Calls by Patrick Ness
I have been plugging away at this year’s Black List Scripts waiting for something to inspire me. Last night I read the brilliant A Monster Calls by Patrick Ness based on the novel by the same name and the same author. I consider myself to be a pretty good audience member, I typically laugh on cue, cry on cue, etc. I commit emotionally to what I’m reading, giving myself to the material no matter what it is. I can tell you that I have not cried like this when reading a script for a few years (not since The Muppet Man).
The story as described in the Black List logline: An adolescent boy with a terminally ill single mother begins having visions of a tree monster, who tells him truths about life in the form of three stories, helping him to cope with his emotions over his dying mom.
Connor is a whip smart teenager in a tragic situation. We have met him before in countless movies. The difference here is that Connor dreads the little moments of empathy that people shoot his way; he detests the compassion and caring. He is a young man desperately in need for his experience to be over. In that silent desperation, he summons a monster. A horrible monster that threatens him with the thing that Connor fears the most, the truth. “I will tell you three stories.” The monster tells Connor. “Stories are the wildest things of all. Stories chase and bite and haunt. And when I have finished my three stories, you will tell me a fourth, and it will be the truth. Your truth.”

The stories are simple parables that play out as short shadow plays throughout the film. They add a distinctive visual element to the writing of an already unusual and beautiful script.
I spend my semesters encouraging my students to write visually. I tell them to write the picture … write the picture. But what I liked most about this script, was that instead of relying on the strength of the picture, it relied on the power of the spoken word. This is a film about the stories that we tell each other in order to understand our experiences. It’s quite a formidable trick to pull off.
Someone please make this movie ASAP.




