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A Time Well Spent

When I first moved here not so many moons ago I taught English for Speakers of Other Languages (ESOL) in Homestead Florida. I had many young students, too old for high school but at the right age to work towards some sort of collegiate training.  I had this one kid name Chan, maybe 18 or 19 years old, from Indonesia. He didn’t know a lick of English, I mean 0, but he was bright and hard working. His parents would drive 40 minutes each way, every day so that he could sit in my classroom for three hours and then we would work for another hour privately.  I dove in determined to teach him and did it for free because frankly I I had nothing else to do. I left Homestead about three years ago when I got the teaching post I now fill and had not seen Chan since.

Yesterday, as I was walking up the stairs towards my classroom,  Chan was there chatting with a friend. He wasn’t waiting for me, just one of those coincidences.  I got so excited I almost jumped out of my skin.  He’s finishing up EAP and is probably less than a year away from starting college.  It feels good to know that this time in my life was well spent.  

Catch of the Day: Valentine

You didn’t see my valentine
I sent it via pantomime
While you were watchin someone else
I stared at you and cut myself
It’s all I’ll do ’cause I’m not free
A fugitive too dull too flee
I’m amorous but out of reach
A still life drawing of a peach

I’m a tulip in a cup
I stand no chance of growing up
I’ve made my peace, i’m dead i’m done
I watched you live to have my fun

I root for you, I love you

You You You You
I root for you, I love you

I made it to a dinner date
My teardrops seasoned every plate
I tried to dance but lost my nerve
I cramped up in the learning curve

I’m a tulip in a cup
I stand no chance of growing up
I’m resigned to sail on through
In the wake of tales of you

I root for you, I love you
I root for you, I love you
I root for you, I love you
I root for you, I love you

Nerdtopia Not Delivered

My expectation when going to see a Ridley Scott film is that it will be good work.   With Prometheus, however, the studios promised nerdtopia. Here it was; a legendary director returning to the sci-fi canon that endeared him to the world in the first place.  A multi-million dollar marketing campaign that included some of the best use of viral media I have yet seen for a film.  A cast of talented actors picked fresh from the pop consciousness.   I ran to the theaters on opening weekend to be delivered onto paradise.   How could it go wrong?

The answer is simply that it can’t, Ridley Scott always turns out good work.   The effects are stunning.  The movie holds tension and scares you (grosses you out too) once it gets going.  On the surface it works phenomenally.   The problem with Prometheus is that it never penetrates that surface.  The script is more an opera than a film. It lacks the subtext that Scott can and has delivered in previous work.

Prometheus deals with a group of astronauts in search of God.   These scientists are on a mission funded by Peter Wayland, the man who created artificial life on earth, a god himself. They are on a ship named after the Titan punished for giving humans fire which allowed us to progress and come to be on equal footing with the gods.  The film is chock-full of daddy issues.  Who is our father? Why did he abandon us? Why did he betray us? Why must he punish us for wanting to be like him?   It would be powerful stuff if it were not said.  From the get-go these existential issues of faith are treated literally rather than figuratively.

There are no allusions or metaphors. The characters just talk about these things.  They actually ask some of the questions I listed above.  The screenplay lacks the fundamental understanding that these questions are unanswerable and to design a plot structure on the premise that your characters will find answers is absurd.  It can have no resolution.  It becomes laughable and melodramatic. There is a moment where Theron’s character utters the word “Father”, I won’t spoil the plot, but there is no amount of talent in the world that would not make that line contrived in the moment in which it is delivered.   There are a lot of these moments.

Lindelof and Spaihts, the writers here, deserve the lion’s share of the blame.  A simple look back at Scott’s own filmography, Alien and Blade Runner, would have showed them what subtlety looks like.  Both of those films are thematically dense but never overbearing. Don’t get me wrong,  go see it in the biggest screen possible.  It’s eye candy and a perfect distraction for the summer, it could have just been more thoughtful.

Script of the Week: Take This Waltz by Sarah Polley

There are stories that you read and you like and there are stories that you like so much that they stick with you over many years, sometimes even forever if you’re lucky.  Take This Waltz by Sarah Polley is a story I have thought about countless times over the course of the last year.

Take This Waltz follows Margot. A twentysomething writer who has been married for five years and is flirting with the idea of having an affair.  Margot however is afraid, afraid of being afraid to be precise.  She is sensitive and a bit naive. She understands the paralyzing effect of fear and has become so terrified of the prospect of being stuck by fear, that she is stuck.

Margot can make no decisions; not about love, life, or her career. What she does well is make excuses and has plenty of reasons for not doing all of the things she yearns to do… love, live, write.   By the end, the reader discovers what they already know. This yearning that Margot feels is simply life taking its course.  Everything that once was young must turn old. The boyfriend who becomes husband, the body that sags, the mind that forgets.  What we learn is that once this yearning to replace that which doesn’t satisfy us as it used to is fulfilled, it is replaced by a new yearning.   The question becomes, when do we accept this?  Like the character of Geraldine explains to Margot “In the big picture. Life has a gap in it Margot. It just does. You don’t go fucking crazy and try to fill it like some lunatic.” 

Or don’t you?

I feel kinship to Margot. But the screenplay succeeds not only because of its main character, it succeeds because it is utterly ordinary.  It sounds and feels like life. The characters are not characters in a movie, they are me, colliding with the fact of being alive.  It’s a beautiful thing.

Trailer:

McKee Says

I open up Robert McKee’s Story to a random page and write about what he says.

The Empire Strikes Back:  When Darth Vader reveals himself to Luke, this pays off multiple setups strung back through two films.  In an instant, however, this also becomes the setup for Luke’s next action.  What will the young hero do? He chooses to try to kill his father, but Darth Vader cuts off his son’s hand ­– a payoff to set up the next action. Now defeated, what will Luke do? He hurls himself off the sky city, trying to commit an honorable suicide – a payoff to set up the next action. Will he die? No, he’s rescued in mid-air by his friends.  This stroke of luck pays off the suicide and becomes the setup for a third film to resolve the conflict between father and son.

McKee explains that when a payoff is delivered it sends the viewer hurling back through the story looking for the moment when the expectation that this payoff would occur was set up.

In the case of Vader’s parenthood reveal, the viewer immediately thinks of the moments when Obi One and Yoda expressed concerned over Luke’s fate.  The Payoff, “Luke I am Your Father”, informs those moments and makes them meaningful by letting us know what Obi-One and Yoda knew all along but held back.  It makes those moments setups for this encounter.

To McKee, setups and payoffs are about creating gaps in the information provided. Writers create the expectation that information will be delivered and then deliver it.  Sometimes it takes a sequel for the information to be delivered, sometimes it is delivered in the very next beat of the scene.

Graffiti Gentrification

“Art is a powerful thing. It has propagandized nations, re-structured entire societies, and compelled countless minds throughout history to ponder new ideas. In Miami, it is re-shaping our territories as a gentrifying agent. Wynwood, once a Puerto Rican neighborhood called Little San Juan, is now Miami’s burgeoning arts district. Fueled by a surge of artists and collectors in the area, developers have begun constructing expensive apartment complexes only blocks away from government subsidized projects. The rich swarm the streets of Wynwood during December’s Art Basel, one of the largest art festivals in the world; but when the festival is over, the nice cars are replaced with homeless drug addicts, and the area is generally considered unsafe to walk at night.”Jesse Meadows, Camila Alvarez (Juan Carlos Espinosa, Ph.D), Department of Art and Art History, Florida International University, Miami, Florida

A part of this process has turned illegal street art into commissioned work. Some of the work is quite impressive. Just a small selection from the little I was able to walk around today. It was scorching today.  (Click on the Pics)

A.G.’s Photostream

Vatican2VaticanSunsetMarriedHorsesHeyBoo
BW2StatueBWFountainPhoto BombRed Tree
Angeltree-lined-streetPurple Courtbattery-park

Some of my favorite Photos

I Heart Miami

Purple Courts at The Sony-Ericsson Open Finals

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